19 lokakuuta 2020

Escape at Night


I participate weekly to a writing challenge. The text must be 100 words the title included. The hostess Susu gives every week three words that have to be included in the text. Last week the words were apartment, honest & to be afraid of. This is the text I wrote. In Finnish it was exactly 100 words, translated into English a lot longer - due to articles and prepositions, we don’t have those in Finnish.

ESCAPE AT NIGHT

It was a gloomy and stormy night. Pipsa had escaped from the annoying atmosphere at home to the family's old villa. The moon glew in the sky like in Transilvania and the wind howled in the corners, creaking at old structures. Pipsa considered herself a calm and sensible woman, but before dark she just had to check all the doors and windows so that no murderer could get inside. Maybe My sister, the Serial Killer wasn’t the best choice for tonight’s reading?

Pipsa listened to the sounds of the old wooden villa and was honestly afraid. Not soothing internal speech nor deep breathing helped. The horror escalated and in the wee hours Pipsa rushed to her car with a red baseball bat and filleting knife. She had to get to town and home apartment and tolerate hubby’s grumpy face.


My original photo.

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#all seasons #der natur donnerstag  #digitalart dienstag #gartenglück #image-in-ing 
#makrotex  #my corner of the world #t in die neue woche #värikollaasit 

13 kommenttia:

  1. Wow liebe Riitta,
    ein Bearbeitung ganz nach meinem Geschmack !
    Schön, dass du wieder mit dabei bist.
    ♥lichst Jutta

    VastaaPoista
  2. Uiiii....that’s a story for Halloween Evening ;-) I didn’t know that you are such a good writer, and you know what? I would love to read more about Pipsa and if she is going to the villa again. Maybe with more adventures. Great story and the perfect pic, just like how you made your digital art of it.

    Hugs and greetings over to you

    N☼va

    VastaaPoista
    Vastaukset
    1. Thank you so much dear Nova!
      This writing challenge is so fun. In the past, in my work life I have written advertisement texts, but no fiction really.
      Have a nice day, abrazos.

      Poista
  3. Hello Riitta!
    Congratulations! ... You have written here an unsettling beginning for a great thriller. Why not continue and write a good work of fiction?
    Good photo, too.
    Have a good week.

    Manuel

    VastaaPoista
    Vastaukset
    1. Hi Manuel thank you for your lovely words,
      This writing challenge is inspiring and the given words awaken the imagination. From these words came Pipsa's story. I wish she can forget her marital quarrels and live happily ever after with her husband! But who knows...

      Poista
  4. Dear me, what is Pipsa doing with the knife?
    I suspect something terrible.
    But well written and the gloomy picture - which is great - fits exactly and would make a good book cover.
    Greetings Eva

    VastaaPoista
    Vastaukset
    1. Thank you Eva. This is pure fiction and Pipsa took the baseball bat & the knife to protect herself :)

      Poista
  5. Ah ah! The photo suits quite well!

    VastaaPoista
  6. Wow, the lightened pic fits perfectly to your story. I also like the original photo with the abandened house. A good spot for taking pics.

    Have a nice day
    Arti

    VastaaPoista
  7. Dear riitta,

    i like the original photo more than the digital version, because i am a fan of lost places :-)

    Sorry.

    Best regards
    Bernhard

    VastaaPoista
  8. Me gusto tu escrito... espero que lo continúes. Un beso.

    VastaaPoista

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